It was funny once I figured out what was actually happening but u may want to un-blur the bomb which drops into the water. This is because it looks like it is part of the background and therefore the viewer pays less attention to it than the fish, this makes it a little hard to actually understand whats going on. Other than that, funny stuff :)
Animation was great and a lot of detail in the backgrounds/environments. I was also a bit confused with the sword but that didnt really effect my vote. Anyone who gave this under 4/5 obviously has no concept of how much effort it takes to animate.
I gave this 5/5
Thank you for your comment, man.
"Attack of the Svankers", what the hell? Hilarious! 5-ed it of course. Make more.
I gave this a 4/5 for the obvious effort put into it but i must admit, i almost felt like taking off marks for that insulting Author's comment. I like the way you arranged the text so that the viewer's eye had to jump around the screen to take it in. It made it quite entertaining. Only thing that could have been improved was that there could have been more animation involving the whole screen and more relation to the music but other than that, great job.
huh what insulting comment
if you're talking about the one complaining about unhelpful reviews, it's because i often get a bunch of idiots who have no fucking idea what they're talking about giving me a 0. It's a justified comment.
Thanks for the godo review!
well unfortunately i cant speak the language this was in but i got the very strong impression that this was merely a silent hill rip-off? the graphics were ok but i struggled hard to find a point behind this submission. perhaps try finding a unique storyline next time
I like the logo at the beginning. The movie was relatively funny, good drawings, and the speech bubble thing was a good idea. Well done.
Thank you for watching, soldier!
That was.... unusual.
Not too bad though, good style. (Not even remotely like Salad Fingers, dunno what that other guy was thinking.) The animation was somewhat lacking, but still, quite funny. Well done.
This is my constructive criticism
I can see what you tried to do here but i strongly recommend u dont. The whole idea is very cliche and used way too often in movies (both box-office and flash). If you do however want to do this sort of action flash here are a couple of tips:
-Dont try to save time by avoiding frame by frame animation. (I know this because i am a repeat offender). It just makes the animation look dodgy.
- Make the voices a lot louder than the music .
- For fight scenes (or scenes with any sort of heavy animation) spend a long time on each frame (im talking like 5 minutes minimum. 20minutes for really good ones)
- Use both shadows and highlights in ur shading (makes the characters seem more 3D)
-Do something fancy with some of the violence like slo-mo, multiple shots etc
- Do something unique with graphics such as black-and-white or high-contrast colouring.
Anyway i hope that helped :P
Other than all that i think u have potential in that u obviously know how to use flash.
Thanks this is a great review. Alot of helpful advice which I will for sure use. I will add shading, spend more time, make voices louder, and etc.
And don't worry. The whole "good warrior" uber-fighter thing was just a joke in this. To give a quick example of the story is the guy saw his father killed as a child whiched screwed up his head 'causeing him to later kill his own family and betray his country in the future. He's more of a villian then a hero.
Agian thanks. This is possibly the most helpful/best review I've gotten so far on NG.
That was very bizarre O.O The drawings were great. It would have been better i think if there were a few more different drawings and less long pauses. You also may want to improve a little on the smoothness of the graphics but other than that i enjoyed it very much.
Was this really your first flash? If so you are very talented. Graphics were great, animation was smooth. Only problem was that there was no load-bar/intro-screen but that doesn't really matter.
I loved this flash. I just thought that u should be aware that there are a couple of flashes out ripping this one off (and badly).
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